Alien Breeder Rhi'kka - Character Concept Sketch

A sketch drawn up for my friend , exploring a character relating to a visual novel he is writing the story for.

We were originally going for a concept sketch of a villainess in the story, but Icy suggested that while the villainess might have a "Cute" side to her, this drawing turned out too "Friendly", while the villainess Alien Breeder character would have been more "Creepy".
...Also, before i forget, she's intended to have somewhat of a "raven" theme.

So... This character instead kinda relates to a spin-off character Icy and I have playfully talked about at times, like a "non-evil clone" or a "daughter" of the broodmother of something like a legion of Lovecraftian cultist solders and eldritch spawn? I don't know the story or if it would fit, but the MOMENT Icy mentioned it to me originally, this character came to mind. And I admittedly like her conceptually more and more each time, so if she doesn't fit there, I might have to wonder if Icy'd let me use her for something else..

..Because if Xen'thar had a daughter, admittedly she WOULD probably look a LOT like this XD


EDIT:
Before I forget...
Yeah, her boobs are somewhat transparent. Enjoy that detail if you look close XD
And it was kind of an experimental effect, but I showed the undersketch of the drawing very lightly, and in green, in hopes of giving this "feel" like her contours are glowing.
I hope it seems more "cool and alien" not "sketchy" XD;